Your atmosphere is very terrifying and frightening and also creepy because for your, sound you put Ronald McDonald laughing creepily and it got my hair-raising. like I was scared of the dark. But it is very interesting because you made y mind make it believing it. But I also like the way how you make it up because it sounds like it is real. And I am gonna get nightmares because the way you made your writing because it was horrifying. Anyways Hopefully you have a great weekend after school and when you get home. Bye By:Shane *!!QUESTIONS!!* How long did it take you?
Bonjuor Zion,
ReplyDeleteYour atmosphere is very terrifying and frightening and also creepy because for your, sound you put Ronald McDonald laughing creepily and it got my hair-raising. like I was scared of the dark. But it is very interesting because you made y mind make it believing it. But I also like the way how you make it up because it sounds like it is real. And I am gonna get nightmares because the way you made your writing because it was horrifying. Anyways Hopefully you have a great weekend after school and when you get home.
Bye
By:Shane
*!!QUESTIONS!!*
How long did it take you?
What made your mind do this?
Why did you made this terrifying?
Hi Zion your atmosphere is very creepy and cool and I like the way you made it a scary story. Well done keep up the great work๐
ReplyDeleteJoanna.
Hi Zion I like the way you made your story creepy and cool and I like your story. Keep up the great work๐
ReplyDeleteJoanna.
Hello Zion,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used a place in your writing and Ronald McDonald laughing.
Bye Bye Zion